The Spooky House

Last Updated on Wednesday, 06 January 2010 13:58

The Spooky House

The year 1988. It was a quiet day as Tim and Mary walked down Piru St the street with wide big dark houses. Tim and Mary just didn’t want to go down that street Mary said we should roll down that street”, but Tim was to scared, he was so chicken. Suddenly we saw a creepy man that lived in one of the houses, They couldn’t see what he looked like because he was wearing a dark black hoody that covered his face. So they just ran quickly home as fast as they could. The next day they watched the news it showed the house down Piru st, and then it said that the creepy man that lived there had died. Late as at night Mary and Tim went down Piru st. They were looking for the house people said rumors about, the house that people had died in. Mary and Tim went to the house. Just as they walked through the squeaky gate they knocked on the door and it just swung open by itself.

They walked in the house the door just closed and locked it self behind them they were trapped. Tim was very scared and his teeth started chattering. The chattering was so loud that some of his teeth started breaking. Mary got scared as they went walking up the big dark stairs. It felt like someone was stalking them. Mary looked in to the mirror and saw her reflection Mary also saw the scary ghost, people called Freddy. She was so scared she started screaming her face off, it was so loud that no one could hear her. Mary couldn’t find Tim he was lost in the house somewhere. She saw a shadow it was coming closer and Tim tried to run but Freddy got him and sliced his head off and threw him down the long dark stairs.

When Mary got to the bottom of the stairs she saw Tim on the floor with no head and she started screaming. Tim’s brother Samson found out that they had gone into the house. So Samson went and got John. As soon as they got to the street John and Samson’s eyes were very wide. They were both very scared as they started walking down the street on that late night. They got to the front door of the scary house and again it just opened by itself so they went in. They heard someone screaming and they tried to run back out bur the door had slammed locked.

They found Mary crying in a room and she was so scared she couldn’t open her mouth. She saw a big scary shadow behind them, she tried to tell them but her mouth was shut tight. The shadow grabbed Samson and chucked him to the other side of the room then ghost Freddy then started to eat him. By now it was three o’clock in the .morning and Mary and John tried to a way out. They saw a big window, when John went to jump threw the window the shadow ghost Freddy grabbed him and threw him through the glass. Mary started screaming sol loud that the ghost went flew off. It was now 6 in the morning Mary could see a light shinny in her face it was a way out it was the basement window. She climbed up and opened the window and hoped out and started to cry because all of her mates had just died. Suddenly the house collapsed right in front of her. The police turned up and started to investigate and asking Mary questions and wanting to know what has happened. But all she could think about was how happy she was that she made it out unhurt.

Written By: Monty Faofua